Mediocre
For a first-timer, incredible job. But, there were many improvements needed:
1. The grammer in some parts was horrible. When you introduced Link, I think it read something like, 'You know Link, save Zelda' or something odd. Check next time.
2. I'm not the biggest gamer in the world, so I didn't recognize half of these guys. And on top of it all, you killed the guys I did recognize, like Mario, Link, and Megaman. And remember people like Samus, and Luigi.
3. Why would these people physically walk into a portal? And the beggining story line was quite long.
However, overall it was pretty good.